tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post7394177038660647765..comments2023-11-05T04:02:39.418-05:00Comments on Michelle's Spell: Opium Was My Mother's Favorite PerfumeMichelle's Spellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15769666862403600253noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-44805781012396590532007-09-22T12:11:00.000-04:002007-09-22T12:11:00.000-04:00Your use of moving back and forth in time in this ...Your use of moving back and forth in time in this piece illustrated how we don't move progressively forward but loop back through the same event in slightly different ways, over and over. A powerful piece of writing, thank you.<BR/>At the risk of of being insensitive, I wonder if there is any possibility of exploring this story from the screaming dolphin's point of view? Coupled with your ability to express the pain that this person caused, I think it could be stunning. His death, because he is looking to the other dolphins for salvation instead of doing the work of saving himself, is a fitting contrast to the author writing through her pain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-36259378661241948042007-09-22T06:27:00.000-04:002007-09-22T06:27:00.000-04:00Just read it, Michelle. I can't say I enjoyed the ...Just read it, Michelle. I can't say I enjoyed the subject; however, the emotional honesty of the piece really shines--filth and all.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-57269626070786331272007-09-22T06:20:00.000-04:002007-09-22T06:20:00.000-04:00Hey Michelle,As always, you know I'm envious! Opi...Hey Michelle,<BR/>As always, you know I'm envious! Opium Magazine is a cool place to hang your hat, so to speak. Looking forward to reading it.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-78875817541309654252007-09-21T19:29:00.000-04:002007-09-21T19:29:00.000-04:00I would send an email to them asking for extra cop...I would send an email to them asking for extra copies then on Mondays you could sit around with your friends having coffee and smoking them.<BR/><BR/>hate the story love the writing<BR/><BR/>peace <BR/><BR/>markthe walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-78915342238436922852007-09-21T18:01:00.000-04:002007-09-21T18:01:00.000-04:00Congratulations on this fine writing.Congratulations on this fine writing.eric1313https://www.blogger.com/profile/13807078704660045859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-11542624499172813752007-09-21T12:20:00.000-04:002007-09-21T12:20:00.000-04:00Very strong work. Congrats, on both the writing a...Very strong work. Congrats, on both the writing and the publishing.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-73358165024545708202007-09-21T12:13:00.000-04:002007-09-21T12:13:00.000-04:00Good luck. Is this Opium magazine a real magazine...Good luck. Is this Opium magazine a real magazine? I know it sounds dumb from me but I ask.Ropihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17214991557644729165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-11467571254925758322007-09-21T11:19:00.000-04:002007-09-21T11:19:00.000-04:00CongratulationsCongratulationsBrianinmplshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933103811088365332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-52789876277726717042007-09-21T10:58:00.000-04:002007-09-21T10:58:00.000-04:00I lost the top to my spray bottle.I lost the top to my spray bottle.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-86917282467956435742007-09-21T10:30:00.000-04:002007-09-21T10:30:00.000-04:00Congrats Michelle!!!!!Nice pants =DCongrats Michelle!!!!!<BR/><BR/>Nice pants =DCherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16211983897122722800noreply@blogger.com