tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post1440727298349187943..comments2023-11-05T04:02:39.418-05:00Comments on Michelle's Spell: Forgive The ExpressionMichelle's Spellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15769666862403600253noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-31821972021089892772007-07-25T12:51:00.000-04:002007-07-25T12:51:00.000-04:00Jon said it all, I guess I'm done then! (Jon, I kn...Jon said it all, I guess I'm done then! (Jon, I know you can write some pretty hot stuff)<BR/>But, really, in real life, the beach sand burns has fleas, enjoying it standing up is nearly impossible, the phone rings at awkward times, and I don't want an expensive piece of clothing ripped off of me. So, maybe that's why we should have fun writing about the impossibilities of sex and its "what ifs." <BR/>I'll admit, I do have a hard time opening up that Pandora's box.<BR/>Lindy<BR/>PS Michelle, with the way you write, and your gift of keen observation, you would probably blow us all over with your sex scenes!Pythia3https://www.blogger.com/profile/15682761270108828712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-59323524653590830682007-07-25T12:25:00.000-04:002007-07-25T12:25:00.000-04:00I think you're right that the hardest scenes to wr...I think you're right that the hardest scenes to write are often the ones on which major story points turn. And it's dangerous to skip over those because sometimes when you get around to writing them they develop differently than you expected and some of the stuff you wrote later has to change.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-85253655719781169512007-07-25T11:33:00.000-04:002007-07-25T11:33:00.000-04:00Well la dee da.Well la dee da.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-64470470015029289372007-07-25T11:25:00.000-04:002007-07-25T11:25:00.000-04:00"Let's face it, in real life we take off our own c..."Let's face it, in real life we take off our own clothes more often than not."<BR/><BR/>That's one of the more clarifying notions I've read in a long time.<BR/><BR/>And sex scenes should rarely be about sex. In writing as in life.Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12773667447659795825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-48736276986014971382007-07-24T14:19:00.000-04:002007-07-24T14:19:00.000-04:00How perfectly worded! I enjoy writing sexual scen...How perfectly worded! I enjoy writing sexual scenes, because it is such a vital part of human existance. (Which you already know!)<BR/><BR/>I've not written for a while now, over a month, and my brain is itching for something to work on. (I also have to write my "part two" for Mark.)<BR/><BR/>Hope all is well!Cherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16211983897122722800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-57471991172743626622007-07-24T13:26:00.000-04:002007-07-24T13:26:00.000-04:00It's bombs away!It's bombs away!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-53014885892045553962007-07-24T13:19:00.000-04:002007-07-24T13:19:00.000-04:00I know exactly what you mean about the writing of ...I know exactly what you mean about the writing of intimacy between two people (loving) or the pure recreational sex or the horrid violent sex being hard to do.<BR/><BR/>Because it has to sound real as it happens. This is one of my weakest area in anything I write, I know I can do it but it is never just the tippity tap out and it's done; this is where I agonize over words no matter which type of sex it is.<BR/><BR/>How far do you go as far as verbiage, do you really need the word cock or pussy or whatever in there or is it as strong when you come at the act sideways?<BR/><BR/>When is it a part of the story or just porn for the sake of having most peoples favorite topic in there? Even though most lie about the amount of sex they have ever had.<BR/><BR/>I think it comes down to a case by case basis. I know I went the whole slam season without using sex and maintained my position in the top 15 but I knew if I was moving on to the main stage I had to write an erotic piece. <BR/><BR/>Because of the accident I never got to read the piece until three or four weeks later but I know from the propositions & comments a fat white guy got that night it would have carried me through.<BR/><BR/>But then in my case it's all just story telling anyway. lmfao<BR/><BR/>sanity has come back<BR/>peace<BR/><BR/>markthe walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25133444.post-65968482351770763362007-07-24T13:16:00.000-04:002007-07-24T13:16:00.000-04:00that exposure and risk... on page or in the real. ...that exposure and risk... on page or in the real. You can make the story with that scene, or you can become a story in life. It's the rejected story that is the hardest part about writing or sex. <BR/><BR/>At least with writing, we can remake the scene to work out after that fact. In life and love, you often only get one shot, so make sure the sheets are changed and the animals fed before hand. <BR/><BR/>Hope your scenes all work in one go.<BR/>Take careeric1313https://www.blogger.com/profile/13807078704660045859noreply@blogger.com